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love your body!
lose weight now.
:bulletblue: is the font use effective?
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A-Shadow-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so perfect. Short but highly effective and oh so true.

The difference in the fonts is nice. The first line feels like the sugar coated message magazines always print, and the second line is the inner message and what our subconscious will literally scream because of our own insecurities. :clap: Well done! :D
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
Thanks very much! :heart:
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A-Shadow-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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EmeraldGuardian-04 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the font on "love your body!". It's similar to the font you find in magazines, so.. I guess that goes hand in hand? ^^;

Not sure about the "lose weight now." part.. :iconthinkingplz: Makes me feel like.. Meh. :shrug:

But, overall, the piece was short, yet it holds a long story. :icongoodjobplz:
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
thank you! yeah, i still don't know what font to use for the "lose weight now" part. :confused:
thanks for your feedback. :aww:
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cerealnovels Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Perfect. Reveals the lie. The use of font is effective.
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
thank you very much. :)
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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The font use is perfect! It really separates the flashy good-vibes veil that the media places over their blunt underlying message that there in one ideal body shape and if you aren't there you need to change.
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
thanks! that was my intention - glad it's apparent. :)
p.s. thank you for the favourite! :heart:
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That1PersonUForgot Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice!~
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