with each kiss
he planted flowers
in my heart,
with roots down
to the core of my being,
My favourite part. Don't know why. Those lines just caught me. Took my breath away.
Another beautiful poem. You might not think it's one of your best works, but it turned out beautifully. I think you did a wonderful job!
There were a few clichés but not a bad poem at all.
I like how you compared the relationship like the end of a warm summer lust, only doomed to fall as foliage in autumns ruse. The ending was very powerful indeed.
A good read.