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xxi.
snowflakes:
grieving skies release anguish
to make men whole.

xx.
the atoms collide,
stardust renews itself
light years away.

xix.
borderlining heaven,
you linger amongst the stars --
space surrounds you.

xviii.
a perfect body:
the natural satellite
with craters on skin.

xvii.
a lone star wishes
upon a dying human --
the beauty of death.

xvi.
clouds wrestle,
thundering when touched --
the art of war.

xv.
like a fallen star,
you are devoured in the night --
heaven or black hole?

xiv.
downpour:
flowers bloom in my heart.

xiii.
four billion years
of atoms treaded --
baby steps.

xii.
you shine brightly like
you are amongst the heavens --
thank my lucky stars.

xi.
curtains draw back &
dreams in colour are revealed --
act one: the rainbow.

x.
heaven weeps --
mortals reach to touch
shooting stars.

ix.
string of pearls:
sewing orion's belt.

viii.
wolves sink teeth --
fabric of society drips
red riding hood's blood.

vii.
in the dead of night,
the kill of life's left behind --
a light year away.

vi.
heaven wants me dead
but suicide nulls entry.
hell takes me alive.

v.
moonlight lingers; forced.
pitch black parties await a
tequila sunrise.

iv.
dark night sky visions
catch the light. lungs collapse; i
sink under the tide.

iii.
meteor shower --
wading through debris
lapping my eyes.

ii.
the tired moon resigned:
dreams pepper the midnight sky,
salted by the stars.

i.
split your bed with three -
her love, your lust, & my shell -
leave no space for me.
a haiku for every day of february; this deviation will (hopefully) be updated regularly. as the month goes on, i hope to explore different haiku types.
:bulletblue: day 1 - drunk or sober (it doesn't matter). written on the 2nd as i forgot yesterday. oops.
:bulletblue: day 2 - devouring the night.
:bulletblue: day 3 - shooting stars through the haze.
:bulletblue: day 4 - drowning in churches. (i'm going to a chvrches gig tonight; this haiku is derived from their song titles).
:bulletblue: day 5 - drunken dream.
:bulletblue: day 6 - key & lock.
:bulletblue: day 7 - a stitch in time.
:bulletblue: day 8 - societal pressures.
:bulletblue: day 9 - alnilam. (sorry, starting to get lazy).
:bulletblue: day 10 - teardrops of luck.
:bulletblue: day 11 - technicolour.
:bulletblue: day 12 - counting stars.
:bulletblue: day 13 - benjamin button.
:bulletblue: day 14 - the sky cries.
:bulletblue: day 15 - hell is on earth.
:bulletblue: day 16 - a flash of passion.
:bulletblue: day 17 - sacrifice.
:bulletblue: day 18 - celestial beauty of flaws. (i've gotten way too lazy).
:bulletblue: day 19 - distance between us.
:bulletblue: day 20 - (big) bang.
:bulletblue: day 21 - icy heart.
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XeonartOmega Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I literally got an art-gasm from that :love:
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
naww, glad you enjoyed it! :D
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sea-ebony Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Writer
beautiful~ 
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
thank you! :heart:
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
These haiku's are fantastic! 
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
thanks so much, & for the favourite. :)
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
You're welcome :) 
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you are amazing. :heart: 
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
As are you. :heart:
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
pfft. :heart:
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student Writer
I like x. the most now. Well done!! :heart:
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
me too. :) i'm too lazy for this now, plus i'm running out of inspiration, haha.
thank you. :heart:
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome :heart:
And yeah, I lost motivation. HaikuWriMo 2014 is over for me now. How many did I write? Like four? What a failure, haha.
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This has been Featured in my journal!


Happy Valentine's Day!!!

Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart  back at you! :aww:
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're sustaining a great mood. :)
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
it's just me being lazy. ;)
thanks!
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, day 10 is divine!
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
aw, thank you. :heart:
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
Meow :3 
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE day one's Haiku.  Great job.

:)
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
thanks so much, & for the favourite. :heart:
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
These are very interesting. :)
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
hopefully in a good way. :P
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Definitely. :D
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
haha, thanks. :heart:
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delirious-eyes Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
absolutely gorgeous imagery.
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
thank you! :hug:
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Writer

I still can't decide whether or not I want to do HaikuWriMo...my haikus would suck so bad compared to everyone else's. Maybe that's why I should do it though...challenge myself...I know I'm three days late, but I could catch up...maybe...I still can't decide...

These are beautiful. I love ii. the best though. :heart:

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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
that's exactly why you should do it! i've never been one for haikus but i'm finding this a lot of fun.
thank you very much. :aww: :heart:
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Writer
You're so welcome! And I think I might give it a go...
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
that's great, i look forward to reading them. :meow:
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Writer
I've done it. Posted the first three. They suck. I can't write haikus.
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Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Still debating on whether or not I want to do HaikuWriMo...
...it's getting harder to resist. ;) These are lovely.
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
you definitely do. :P
thank you! :heart:
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Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Fineee.
You're welcome!
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
yay! looking forward to reading!
p.s. thank you for the favourite. :la:
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Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student General Artist
You're ever so welcome! :hug: And thanks!
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work.  I have to work on my Haiku soon!
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
thanks! looking forward to reading them. :heart:
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BackShelfSouvenir Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Love this! Especially the first haiku(of course, right?) lol. Great job and I hope you follow through. :P :happybounce: :heart:
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
aw, thank you! you're too nice. :heart::hug:
here's hoping I do. =P
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BackShelfSouvenir Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Lol Thank you! *gaves :hug: so you do follow through* And :hug: for being soo cool! :D :heart:
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
back at you! :huggle:
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